Hello classmates. Today I speak about things that would like to learn.
Well, I have very things that I would like to learn, because I really love
learn new things; I’m very happy with I have new knowledge.
Well, for example when I have 14
years old, I would learn plays the guitar, but I’m really bad with the guitar,
because I have not patience with this. Later in the last year of school I
would learn play keyboard, but I learn basic things, because I have not time
for practice... but I always dreamt with learn this someday, because I
really love their melodies. I like the music so much, because I’m felt very
relaxed.
I would too learn more idioms, for example English, Japanese and Italian.
English because is very necessary for my career, and also is the universal
language. Japanese because I really love the Japanese music, because my
favourite compositor is Japanese and I dreamt with listened their songs
understanding all, without translation. And Italian because I think that is a
beautiful language and I dream with go there someday.
Well, I always would to learn some martial art, and I very happy because
now I practiced AIKIDO, and is very great.
I hope you are fine, good bye
Jenny’s correction
Hello classmates. P
Today I speak T (I’ll tell you) about
things that λ (I) would like to learn. Well, I have very things that I would
like to learn, because I really love λ (to) learn new things; I’m very happy
with I have new knowledge. WE (I’m very happy when I learn new things) Well, for example P (,) when I have T (was) 14 years old, I would () learn plays T (learned to play) the guitar,
but I’m T (was) really bad with the guitar (or with this), because I have not T (didn’t have) patience with this. Later P (,) in the last year of
school P (,) I would learn T (tried to learn or learned) λ (to) play λ (the) keyboard, but I learn T
(learned) basic things, because I have not T (didn’t have) time for
WW (to) practice... but I always dreamt with λ (to) learn this someday, because
I really love their WE (the) melodies λ (of this instrument). I like the
music so much, because I’m () felt T (feel) very relaxed λ (with this).
I would λ (like) too WF (to) learn more idioms
NA (languages), for example English, Japanese and Italian. English because λ
(it) is very necessary for my career, and also λ (it) is the universal
language. Japanese P (,) because I really love the Japanese music, () because
WW (and) my favourite compositor is Japanese λ (too) and () (also) I dreamt T
(dream) with WW (to) listened T (listen to) their WE (his) songs
understanding all λ (the songs), () without translation. And () λ
(finally) Italian P (,) because I think that λ (it) is a beautiful language and
I dream with go there (to Italy) someday.
Well, I always would to learn some martial art, and I T (am) very happy because
now WF (now, because) I practiced T (I’m practicing) AIKIDO, and λ
(it) is very great WE (genial).
I hope you are fine, good bye P (.)