jueves, 14 de junio de 2012



Hello classmates. Today I speak about things that would like to learn. Well, I have very things that I would like to learn, because I really love learn new things; I’m very happy with I have new knowledge.  
Well, for example when I have 14 years old, I would learn plays the guitar, but I’m really bad with the guitar, because I have not patience with this.  Later in the last year of school I would learn play keyboard, but I learn basic things, because I have not time for practice...  but I always dreamt with learn this someday, because I really love their melodies. I like the music so much, because I’m felt very relaxed.
I would too learn more idioms, for example English, Japanese and Italian. English because is very necessary for my career, and also is the universal language. Japanese because I really love the Japanese music, because my favourite compositor is Japanese and I dreamt with listened their songs understanding all, without translation. And Italian because I think that is a beautiful language and I dream with go there someday.
Well, I always would to learn some martial art, and I very happy because now I practiced AIKIDO, and is very great.
I hope you are fine, good bye

Jenny’s correction

Hello classmates. P
Today I speak T (I’ll tell you) about things that λ (I) would like to learn. Well, I have very things that I would like to learn, because I really love λ (to) learn new things; I’m very happy with I have new knowledge. WE (I’m very happy when I learn new things)   Well, for example P (,) when I have T (was) 14 years old, I would () learn plays T (learned to play) the guitar, but I’m T (was) really bad with the guitar (or with this), because I have not T (didn’t have) patience with this.  Later P (,) in the last year of school P (,) I would learn T (tried to learn or learned) λ (to) play λ (the) keyboard, but I learn T (learned) basic things, because I have not T (didn’t have) time for WW (to) practice...  but I always dreamt with λ (to) learn this someday, because I really love their WE (the) melodies λ (of this instrument). I like the music so much, because I’m () felt T (feel) very relaxed λ (with this).
I would λ (like) too WF (to) learn more idioms NA (languages), for example English, Japanese and Italian. English because λ (it) is very necessary for my career, and also λ (it) is the universal language. Japanese P (,) because I really love the Japanese music, () because WW (and) my favourite compositor is Japanese λ (too) and () (also) I dreamt T (dream) with WW (to) listened T (listen to) their WE (his) songs understanding all λ (the songs), () without translation. And () λ (finally) Italian P (,) because I think that λ (it) is a beautiful language and I dream with go there (to Italy) someday.
Well, I always would to learn some martial art, and I T (am) very happy because now WF (now, because) I practiced T (I’m practicing) AIKIDO, and λ (it) is very great WE (genial).
I hope you are fine, good bye P (.)

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